In class we have learned about new things we need to have in our recount writing, so we have made sure we added a title and who, where and when our event happened to our story.
Here is Jahn, Levi, Brody and Liam's writing.
Reflection-
We did well at making our titles and making sure our stories made sense.
I wish that I could have added more sentences to my story.
Kia ora Taonga,
ReplyDeleteWe really liked reading your writing. We liked the pictures that you drew. The titles were really cool and catchy. It was really fun looking at your blog.
Bye for new,
Nga Ringa kids.
Thank you Nga Ringa for commenting on our blog and we really liked your comment.
ReplyDeleteHi my name Kasadayah. I really like your writing Jahn because you have describing words and it makes your writing cool.
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is zahara your writing is amazing think you for that comment by Zahara.
ReplyDeleteI like your writing's because it has describing words and it makes your writing really amazing writing the best.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Taonga,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your writing about the sand dunes. I especially liked the surfing one. Next time maybe you could write something about the beach or riding a motorbike.